Tuesday, 10 November 2009

problem and solution essay ( Smoking )

Why smoking is harmful to health? Smoking is considered one of the most harmful habits which can effect the person badly in many ways , specially the Pregnant women . It cause different types of cancers and lung disease . And it’s one of the main causes of death . The symptoms of smoking appear suddenly and it continues appearing will the person still smoking . This essay will discuss about the smoking problems and the solutions of smoking .
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  1. Jonathan11 November 2009 at 00:09

    Very good structure to this introduction. Some language errors, however.
    1) why smoking is harmful - word order
    2) effect - word form
    3) the person - #
    4) specially - word form
    5) Pregnant - C
    6) It cause - SVA
    7) it continues - 'it' is the WW
    8) will the person still smoking - rewrite
    9) Thesis statement is general - how many problems? How many solutions?

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